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Offline nage

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on: April 30, 2008, 01:00:13 PM
Umm... so. Eh.  :oops:

Warnings first:

1. It could be better.
2. My voice is a bit shaky and piercing.
3. I sound like a kid. @_@;
4. I did some mistakes.

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Reply #1 on: April 30, 2008, 01:15:39 PM
The background is too quiet... And the Japanese pronouncation is a bit funny :P

But I wouldn't say you sound like a kid... But the tune is right and, maybe to avoid the piercingness, sing a bit further away from the mic...

But overall, it's good :D Do you sing often or in a band/choir or something?

EDIT: And in the end, why didn't you mumble along with Yoshiki? :D

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Reply #2 on: April 30, 2008, 01:17:38 PM
If you think it's sooooo shitty, why do you upload it here? XD; Euh ...

Haven't listened to it yet, i'm downloading it right now. XD I'm just ... wondering.

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Reply #3 on: April 30, 2008, 01:21:35 PM
Yes, my Japanese pronunciation sounds English, doesn't it? XD I've been told that..... But I don't know how to make it better now.  :oops:

Well, I was 5 cm away from the mic but it wasn't enough. I'll try further next time.

No, I don't sing anywhere else than at home. And I've had no couching.

@ Maya: Well, I was asking that myself... >.>; I think I said it to make you not expect a good cover.


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Reply #4 on: April 30, 2008, 07:31:37 PM
I think you did fine, Nage  :) Much better than I ever would. And your voice is sweet IMO, feminine...  :P

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Reply #5 on: April 30, 2008, 07:58:52 PM
Downloading right now ! Can't wait to hear your voice :D hehehe ! I'll edit my post later when I'll have listened to it.

It sounds cool, but the music should be louder (I think you already talked about that though).

I think what Toshi sings is REALLY hard to sing, maybe easier for women cause he sings pretty high, dunno though. So really, nice job !

You play the guitar solo really well too :D

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Reply #6 on: April 30, 2008, 09:48:26 PM
The pronounciation is a bit funny, but otherwise it's not bad, you stay in pitch and you don't sound like a kid.  :D

I think the best way to learn pronounciation is through listening to a lot of spoken japanese (rather than sung). Some sounds found in japanese aren't in the english language (and from my 2 minute youtube visit, not in slovak either), so it's hard to know intuitively.



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Reply #7 on: April 30, 2008, 10:17:54 PM
I don't think at all that you sound like a kid! :)
And concerning that you haven't had voice coaching it really doesn't sound bad in my opinion. Not professional, but somehow cute.
Yeah, the music is a little bit low, but... shit happens. ;) Next time you know what to do then, hehe.

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Reply #8 on: April 30, 2008, 10:43:10 PM
Thanks a lot for nice words!  :oops: I thought of worse things.... >.>

@ X-J: thanks.

@ Lucs: I picked this one because of the higher tones. I tried Rusty Nail too, but I'm not very good with low tones. @_@;;; I tend to sing those quieter... *shrugs*

@ nemetroid: Thank you. I'll try to listen to it more then. ^^ Oh, I always thought it's easier for Slovak person to speak Japanese than for Englishman actually... >.>

@ Camicat: Thanks! ^^ Yes, it'll be louder next time.


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Reply #9 on: June 13, 2008, 03:02:58 PM
There's a new version upped. Hopefully better.


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